In the abstracts of Newton’s brain
There spawned a concept of a Limit
And applied it has showed time and again,
All that ever is and will be; must follow this in spirit

Let’s displace this abstract –
Remove it form the field of math and physics.
And turn the light and to it adapt
The relatable study of civics.

With our current infrastructure,
There exist a variety of that which is undefined.
If everything can be subject to a filibuster,
Anything can be undermined…

Our limits grow exponentially –
But if a new structure we were to put in place…
Let’s make it work transparent and interdepartmentally;
Our limits we might efface

And a more prefect union will have been created.

© Luis Valencia


About luisydomonique

Poetry Year Long Project between Luis Valencia and the Brilliant, Beautiful, and Vivace Domonique Celeste Alcaraz.
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4 Responses to Limited

  1. 2zpoint says:

    Yeah…I hate limits too. They are so constrictive.LOL! man …have a happy Thanksgiving Luis… You have made some awesome poems over the past month and I am Thankful for your friendship and words. Take care!

    • Thank you for your comment 2zpoint, you can tell the post date is old I will be updating the blog soon It’s just been a busy (and exciting) few weeks.

      And a happy thanks giving to you also!

  2. Scent of my heart says:

    Limits … who likes them? Lovely post here! Nice word choice.

  3. Scent of my heart says:

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