Self Ascendancy

All water falls up as a particle
Our comprehension of Gravity becomes a failure
For every action there’s an opposite and equal something remarkable
But everything is always blur –

Pseudo Understanding Permeates the brain
And our great intelligence we feign
As a race we get our masks and put on a façade
Only to decay ourselves in aforethought

Thoughts of what we’ve said and done
Frayed emotions are the smoking gun

Unabridged pages of our mind
Lost reading, until the quantity makes us disinclined

Beyond the edge there’s nothing
Let’s lose ourselves in fucking

Until those endorphins release
So I can finally be at ease –

In deafening, overwhelming, silence

© Luis Valencia


About luisydomonique

Poetry Year Long Project between Luis Valencia and the Brilliant, Beautiful, and Vivace Domonique Celeste Alcaraz.
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3 Responses to Self Ascendancy

  1. 700miles says:

    fantastic. i’ve enjoyed a whole lot of your writing. i especially like how you use science to mold your writing into a romantic meaning. good stuff. take care. keep working on those rhymes! 🙂

  2. mairmusic says:

    Almost surreal in the juxtaposition of images and language– very interesting!

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