You’d think she’s the queen
By the way all the guys are prostrated
Yet all she does is flagellate and demean

Lofty in her manner of approach
She thinks herself dainty
With someone that vain, there’s much to reproach

The girls, once seeing on a good man become foisted
Broken down into obsequiousness
In their compliments, demeanor, and praise, they become closefisted
They deign talk to this girl, this false lioness

And so, now without servants
She ceases to be a queen.
(Serves that bitch right for being mean.)

© Luis Valencia

…that is how that works right?


About luisydomonique

Poetry Year Long Project between Luis Valencia and the Brilliant, Beautiful, and Vivace Domonique Celeste Alcaraz.
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3 Responses to Hierarchy

  1. notjeffery says:

    I love the last 3 lines!
    That sums up so many pretentious and fake ass people in this world – and even in the world of blogs!
    Very awesome, it put a massive smile on face.
    Keep up the great work guys!


  2. So much anger and sentiment…when the table turns, it gets terrible for the mean.
    Nicely done…Cheers!

  3. Jingle says:

    hope that you stay fit and feel well.

    support us by visiting a few poets from the list…

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