Incomplete

The big bang is just a vortex paradox of the physical manifestation
Of an emotion you once made me feel.
Representing infinity the instant it led to creation,
Of the moment I knew you.

And like the universe it is expanding into nothingness,
Moreover if I were to experience what once was; give rebirth to a mess,
With ferocity and intensity to rival the past,
It would have to be an equally grand happenstance.

Whose instantiation in this system everything would aggregate.
Buried in such intense a series of events, exist a word with which we can all relate –

Happiness,
Left to wonder why mine is lost
In an infinite universe

© Luis Valencia

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About luisydomonique

Poetry Year Long Project between Luis Valencia and the Brilliant, Beautiful, and Vivace Domonique Celeste Alcaraz.
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2 Responses to Incomplete

  1. Jingle says:

    lost happiness,

    u will find it again after a break…

    life is complex,
    hang in there.
    smiles!

    beautiful poem!

  2. Jingle says:

    http://thursdaypoetsrallypoetry.wordpress.com/2010/08/24/official-poetry-awards-the-celebrate-poet-of-july-plus/

    awards are posted,
    u have a runner up.
    plus two on the bottom,
    many thanks for voting!
    🙂

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